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     <td><ul><li>This is purely cosmetic, but in the TOC, the names of the appendixes don’t line up properly.  It’s as though some use spaces and some used tab between the Appendix letter and the name of the appendix. <li>Pg 47,Section M.1, the Figure is labeled “Figure Title: MISSING – please insert”.  The original had no figure label at all.  I think we could label it “Figure M.2-1:  Patient Demographics Supplier in a Multi-domain Environment” <li>Pg 56: Label the table: "Table P.1.1-1: Storyboard Attribute Values <li>Pg 61: Label the table at the top of the page: "Table P.2.1-1: Storyboard Attribute Values<li>Pg 61: Label the interation diagram "Figure P.2.2-1: Patient Encounter Messages" <li>Pg 73: label the table:  "Table V.3.2-1" Web Services Requirements for non-HL7v3 Transations"<li>Table V.2.4-1 on pg 71 goes off the right side of the page.</ul></td>
     <td><ul><li>This is purely cosmetic, but in the TOC, the names of the appendixes don’t line up properly.  It’s as though some use spaces and some used tab between the Appendix letter and the name of the appendix. <li>Pg 47,Section M.1, the Figure is labeled “Figure Title: MISSING – please insert”.  The original had no figure label at all.  I think we could label it “Figure M.2-1:  Patient Demographics Supplier in a Multi-domain Environment” <li>Pg 56: Label the table: "Table P.1.1-1: Storyboard Attribute Values <li>Pg 61: Label the table at the top of the page: "Table P.2.1-1: Storyboard Attribute Values<li>Pg 61: Label the interaction diagram "Figure P.2.2-1: Patient Encounter Messages" <li>Pg 73: label the table:  "Table V.3.2-1" Web Services Requirements for non-HL7v3 Transations"<li>Table V.2.4-1 on pg 71 goes off the right side of the page.</ul></td>
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Revision as of 17:15, 5 August 2009

This page tracks the progress on reviewing ITI documents returned from the sponsor prior to Aug 2009 publication.

Document Reviewer Status Comments
Vol 1

Karen

 Done
  • TOC is fine.
  • line 265 should be Revision 6.0 (it is currently 5.0)
  • Section 9.2.1 line 1552-1591 each element in the list is numbered 1. original source numbers 1-8
  • P. 133 - I am not inclined to change the example at this point. It has been a part of the TF Final Text since last year with no complaints
Vol 2a Lynn Reviewed
  • There are no page numbers in the document footers
  • Sec 3.4.4 - the label for Figure 3.4-1 is on the top of one page, the figure is on the bottom of the previous page
  • Cells in tables between lines 3435 and 3470 (sec 3.16.4.1.5 thru 3.16.4.2.4) are filled in with grey. They are not that way in the 2009-07.27 version of the document
2b Lynn Reviewed
  • The page number in the footer is right-justified. I think all of the other documents have it centered.
  • For the TOC, Volume 2a goes to Header level 3 (eg 3.4.1), but Vol 2b only goes to Level 9 (eg 3.35). My preference is for the more detailed TOC. It allows me to quickly find the Security Considerations subsection, for example.
  • In Vol 2a, each transaction (eg 3.31) starts at the top of a new page. I think this is preferable to the format in Vol 2b, where there is not a page break preceding the start of a new transaction definition.
  • Sec 3.43.3 - the label for Figure 3.43.4 is on the top of pg 115, the figure is on the bottom of the previous page – 114.

2x

 Lynn Reviewed
  • This is purely cosmetic, but in the TOC, the names of the appendixes don’t line up properly. It’s as though some use spaces and some used tab between the Appendix letter and the name of the appendix.
  • Pg 47,Section M.1, the Figure is labeled “Figure Title: MISSING – please insert”. The original had no figure label at all. I think we could label it “Figure M.2-1: Patient Demographics Supplier in a Multi-domain Environment”
  • Pg 56: Label the table: "Table P.1.1-1: Storyboard Attribute Values
  • Pg 61: Label the table at the top of the page: "Table P.2.1-1: Storyboard Attribute Values
  • Pg 61: Label the interaction diagram "Figure P.2.2-1: Patient Encounter Messages"
  • Pg 73: label the table: "Table V.3.2-1" Web Services Requirements for non-HL7v3 Transations"
  • Table V.2.4-1 on pg 71 goes off the right side of the page.
Vol 3 Karen Done Multiple concerns with tables 4.1-5, 4.1-6 - added bullets that were lost, changed examples to be different format, changed width of last column to better fit the contents. Also TOC needed regeneration. R
Async Karen Done Title page says Final Text - should say Trial Implementation
PDO   Not yet returned  
XCA Karen Reviewed So many concerns it requires a re-review
XDR Lynn Reviewed
  • On the top of page 16, change “The following section 3.41 is only included here for guiding the reader to the XDS.b Supplement,…” to “The following section 3.41 is only included here for guiding the reader to ITI TF-2b,…”
DRR Karen    
MPQ   Not yet returned  
NAV   Not yet returned  
RFD   Not yet returned  
SVS   Not yet returned  
Pat Merge   Not yet returned  
DSG   Not yet returned  
XCPD   Not yet returned  
PDO   Not yet returned  
PIX/PDQ HL7 V3   Not yet delivered  
DSUB   Not yet delivered  
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